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Denethor Poetry Writing Challenge

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Yes, you read that right. There is no doubt, in our fevered minds at least, that the Steward had a drawerful of stuff hidden away. No-one Must Ever Know. But we think these jewels should see the light of day, and we want you to supply them.

They would, of course, be *ghastly* - except that technically they would be superb. Denethor would pretend he's writing for the technical challenge, and would admire forms that had strict rhyming and metrical schemes. They would also be very compact and involve word-play.

We have a number of suggestions, but you can take this particular challenge wherever you would like. There is no need to supply them in Sindarin, or even in Quenya - which would of course be Denethor's code, sorry, language of choice.

  1. The haiku. The presence of this particular form in Gondor is something of a mystery, although the extended voyages of the Númenoreans might have brought this particularly attractive and compact form back to Gondor. "Haiku is a contemplative poetry that valorizes nature, color, season, contrasts and surprises. Usually it has 3 lines and 17 syllables distributed in 5, 7 and 5. It must register or indicate a moment, sensation, impression or drama of a specific fact of nature. It's almost like a photo of some specific moment of nature. More than inspiration, it needs meditation, effort and perception to compose a real haiku." The thinking man's verse.

    "White tower stands watch
    Yet falls the shadow, despite
    Our far-sightedness."

  2. The rubáiyát. The Haradric influence on Gondorian verse provided a particularly attractive form for the Steward - despite his misgivings about the impurity of a non-Númenorean form (there would be just a hint of decadence about writing these).

    These are quatrains, each complete in itself, and generally epigrammatic. The first, second, and fourth lines rhyme, and sometimes also the third. The pre-emininent practitioner of this form in Gondor was Sathros, who was born in Umbar under the reign of Taranon Falastur, and was the son of a Númenorean lord and a Haradrim lady. He had as his motto: 'Abridge, concentrate, distil' and his verse are filled with a sense of the transience of all things human, the pleasures of existence, and the resignation with which the stoics and the people of the South accepted good and evil as alike predestined.

    "But helpless Pieces of the Game He plays
    Upon this Chequer-board of Nights and Days;
    Hither and thither moves, and checks, and slays
    And one by one back in the Closet lays."

  3. The linnod. A form of word play, consisting, in its original form, of a single line of matching halves. Each half is made up of a trochee, a dactyl, and a trochee (dum dum, dee dum dum, dum dum; dum dum, dee dum dum, dum dum).

    The linnod, of course, developed its form in the South Kingdom, becoming an 'extended linnod' or 'linnod couplet', with the North Kingdom retaining the shorter, 'purer' form. Denethor would be more familiar with the linnod couplet, a rhyming pair of linnods. It would no doubt be particularly galling that Thorongil could probably extemporize the shorter and punchier form on demand.

    "Grief tears my soul in morning - harsh tares in soft fields of corn.
    Tears dull the growing of grief, rain the gold tiers of new dawn."

    "To she who seeks the free-soaring seabirds at night--I try."

  4. The love sonnet. Because you just know there's a bunch of these hidden away as well. You can pick your own form for this (, if you're brave enough to go there.

Entries with Stories

The following authors have entered a story in the Challenge.

Alawa - Sonnets by the Steward
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Last Updated: 27 Jan 03
My responses to the Denethor poetry challenge. Not exactly love sonnets, but all I could manage.
Avon - Obedience
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Last Updated: 09 May 03
A terzanelle written by Denethor about what he requires - and what is required of him (but the inability to scan is mine not his, of course.)
Celandine Brandybuck - Denethor's Fevered Scribbles
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Last Updated: 27 Mar 04
In response to the Denethor Poetry Writing Challenge, I humbly submit these misbegotten lines.
Dwimordene - That Which Remains Us
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Last Updated: 15 Dec 06
Dwim's attempt to answer the Una/Andria challenge of "What would Denethor's poetry look like?" Conceived as belonging in the same storyline as "Love Sweet as Poison" and "Father and Sons." Faramir, a trunk, and an encounter with a side of Denethor that he never knew.

3rd Place MEFAs—Drama: Remembering
Ehtele - From the Desk of Denethor
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Last Updated: 01 Mar 03
Various poems from the desk of Gondor's infamous Steward. In answer to the Denethor's Poetry Challenge.
Elvenesse - Abandon Choice
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Last Updated: 03 Nov 05
Entered for the Denethor Poetry Writing Challenge, my attempt at writing something from Denethor's perspective.
fileg - Finduilas
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Last Updated: 28 May 03
This is a love poem that was written too late - a villanelle for Finduilas...
fileg - Ascension
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Last Updated: 01 May 03
For the Denethor Poetry Challenge, a terzanelle that questions the futile nature of waiting for redemption.
Karigan Rohanna - Before the Fire
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Last Updated: 05 Jul 03
Denethor Poetry Challenge-- Denethor indulges in the poem that tells two stories simultaneously in only four verses.
Lady Masterblott - White Tree Under Moon
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Last Updated: 19 Jul 04
My Haiku Style Answer to the Denethor Poetry challenge
Leonora - Bitter Glass, The
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Last Updated: 20 Mar 03
In response to the Denethor Poetry Writing Challenge, three brief glimpses into the mind of the last Ruling Steward of Gondor.
Llinos - Denethor Poetry
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Last Updated: 16 Dec 02
Four limericks about Denethor and a Father's Day Card from Faramir - rather sad really.
LOTR lover - Regret
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Last Updated: 16 Dec 02
Denethor Poetry Challenge Response--Haiku
Meg Thornton - More From Denethor's notebooks
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Last Updated: 25 Jan 03
Occasionally, when I'm depressed enough, Denethor and I collaborate on poetry. Yes, that's the best way to describe it. So, here are some that the Steward of Gondor and I came up with as we took our guided tour through hell.
Meg Thornton - Denethor
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Last Updated: 25 Jan 03
My response to the Denethor Poetry Challenge
rene - Palantir, The
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Last Updated: 23 Jan 03
Denethor channels a master poet. Poe-filk, parody, and I make no apologies.
Starlight - Reason or Feeling?
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Last Updated: 25 Jul 03
Denethor strives to find some answers through an unlikely - though effective- medium. Answer to the Denethor's poetry challenge.
Stultiloquentia - In Denethor's Locked Cupboard
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Last Updated: 12 Jul 04
The Steward writes a sestina and a haiku.

Mithril Awards 2003 - Commended - Best poetry

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Challenge Info

Open Date: July 27, 2002

Closed: July 27, 2003

Challenge Topic: Poetry

Entries: 18

Originator: Altariel

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