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Adraefan

26. Chorus VI (Coronation)

Ahhh… Breathe the eternal sigh, Aragorn, you are our King. Flocking birds burning away into the bright sun sun sun sunlight splayed all through the Citadel, joyous and crowds, thronging crowds of Minas Tirith cheering cheering cheering silent… But you do not hear them, Aragorn, do you? As the heavy crown, tall, wing-tipped glowing intense, burdened is placed on your head your head the crown pressing against your temples and brow whispering to you with promises to weigh to weigh you down with a kingdom… And so Mithrandir blesses, and Frodo bows, and all bow now, all bow bowing to you, Aragorn, as you straighten, steely-eyed looking out over the waves of hair glowing in the fickle sun. Look right, Aragorn: You see Boromir, kneeling, smiling rare, Eru, scarred and gaunt and red-eyed… You see Faramir, kneeling, smiling broad, Eru, pale and weary and… Thoughts: I have inherited a wounded kingdom. Look left, Aragorn: You see Mithrandir, bowing, lips quirked, A wizard’s counsel will be needed… You see the hobbits: one, two, three, four, Pallidistant Frodo, Loyalstout Sam, Slywise Merry, Innocent Pippin… And you see Gimli and Legolas, too and Éomer and Éowyn and Imrahil and and and… The pale crisp sky over what-was-Mordor. And the crown, the crown living, breathing, buzzing whispering so that your royal blood quickens and your ancient heart races and suddenly you know it all yes, yes you understand now… Aragorn. All the Kings of Old, all the West, all the glory, silent. The chant, almost mournful, everyone’s breath is stilled. “Et Eärello Endorenna utúlien… Sinome maruvan ar Hildinyar tenn' Ambar-metta…” And this moment is locked away in time, forever sealed.

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Author: Aeneid

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Rating: Adult

Last Updated: 10/20/05

Original Post: 08/10/04

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