Bitter Valentine's Day Poetry Challenge


1. Chapter one

Lady Artanis
Finarfin's Courts

To the fair maiden of the House of Finarfin(<-- that Vanyan jerk) with the hair I desire so much,

I hope you like my wonderful verses and that you will accept my request when I ask you for the 3rd time.

Here comes...

Artanis, your beauty outshines
the light of Laurelin fair
The only (rightful) son of Finwe pines
for one little lock of your hair

there's more...

O beauteous jewel
of golden-ness full
Locks yellow pool
at my feet

and more...

I the valiant, noble, fair, skilful heir,
You the shiny, glossy, liquid hair
Are meant to be together, love
Let us fly together on the sky above

and my masterpiece... (Kanafinwe said that this was something called a 'haiku')

Your golden tresses
cannot be rendered in words
the two Trees mingled

You do not know what it is like. You do not know what it is like, Nerwen.
To love some hair, to love some hair. The way I love yours.

With the deepest affections,
Feanaro - the Spirit of Fire
The most skilful, fairest and noblest of the princes of the Noldor.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.


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Author: Maid of Ainur

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Rating: General

Last Updated: 03/28/03

Original Post: 03/14/03

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