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Descent

Descent—vignette written in the spirit of the HA Onlist Tolerance challenge. It doesn't quite fit the challenge (word limit issues), and the ending is a bit weak. It doesn't as nicely hook up tolerance with warfare as would be ideal, and these sort of pull-back endings can always backfire by being a little too much.

Oh well. Maybe one day, I'll have an epiphany and the story I'd like to tell about the Kin-Strife will emerge.

Dwim

 

 

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