Forum: Anglachel - Stories

Discussing: OMY Ch. 13 - Playing With Fire

OMY Ch. 13 - Playing With Fire

Playing With Fire Warnings: Crude sexual humor, blunt sexual talk In which Gilda and Bilbo dance, Bargo is told he is not the dearest to Frodo's heart, and the boys have a very hot time. A bunch of local OC farmers standing around yacking.

 

 

Re: OMY Ch. 13 - Playing With Fire

I've posted revisions through chapter 13, almost all of them dealing with wording & grammar. References to Merry are having the most changes to reflect the behavior of an older child. Big thanks to everyone who commented on the story so long ago - I've been feeling guilty for not putting your corrections into place sooner. Ang

 

 

In Forums

Discussion Info

Intended for: General Audience

This forum is open to all HASA members. It is read-only for the general public.

Membership on HASA is free and it takes only a few minutes to join. If you would like to participate, please click here.

If you are already a member, please log in to participate.

« Back to Anglachel - Stories