Discussing: cywydd llosgyrnog
26 Jun 03 3:03 AM
I spent tonight writing in a place that is not ready to be written, and when I stopped to make coffee, this came to me, entire -- and then refused all but two small attempts at editing. It is too undefined for How Do I, which is closed anyway – but it demanded my attention. Here’s your chance to Beta for me -- is there anything here, or is it just automatic writing that should be journaled and ignored? Does it say anything to you? I would dismiss it as simply personal, but of all forms, I never expected a cywydd llosgyrnog to appear fully formed in my mouth. Any input, please??
each note was separate and discrete,
incomplete - yet from afar
came echoes, answering, that seemed
to know the answers I had dreamed
when redeemed by love’s northstar
Re: cywydd llosgyrnog
26 Jun 03 8:31 AM
Reply To: 12087
I have to go now, but I'll be back to give better feedback, Tay. It is so amazing that this form is speaking to you so clearly! Good job!