Peace

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Nearly twenty years after the Ring War, two veterans reminisce in the Houses of Healing. Featuring Iorlas, Elboron, Borlas, and original characters.
 

 

Chapter List

Ch# Title Words Com. Updated
1 Peace 3,921 0 05 Oct 14
2 Author's Notes 39 0 03 Apr 05
Appx. Word Count 3,960 0  
 

 

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Peace

DKP - 21 Sep 06 - 12:22 AM

General Comment

Hello, Aeneid,

I really enjoyed your portrayal of Iorlas, and of his memories of the Houses and of the time just after the Ring War was won. You had such a clear description of the brilliance that seemed to light everything once peace was won, I felt I could see the "sparkle" myself. The exchange between the unnamed healer and Iorlas did a very nice job of highlighting the changes between children of the Ring War, and children born in a time of peace. And I loved the relationship between Iorlas and his family. You showed so much in that short snippet at the end. :)

This story serves as a great lead-in to the next two in the trio that you and Aliana wrote, but also stands very well on its own. Thank you for sharing this!


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Story Information

Author: Aeneid

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 4th Age

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 04/25/05

Original Post: 03/09/05

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Banjoverse: The Full Epic - 13 stories - Owner: Banjoverse!
The full list of stories set in banjoverse. Chronologically. Gondor, Third Age. War of the Ring era and beyond.
Included because: A vignette of Iorlas many years after the War. Reflective, emotional piece.

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