I Can Feel It!

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Story Summary

Four arrows hit the Mirkwood elf before he fell. “Legolas!” Words had been said, but no one can turn back time. “I should have listened to you before,” Aragorn said, as he tried to save his best friend’s life…
 

 

Chapter List

Ch# Title Words Com. Updated
1 01 947 1 16 Dec 05
2 02 951 0 26 Dec 05
3 03 1,125 0 01 Jan 06
4 04 842 0 16 Jan 06
5 05 968 0 07 Feb 06
6 06 869 0 20 Feb 06
7 07 618 0 14 Apr 06
8 08 902 0 14 Dec 06
9 09 919 0 25 Dec 06
10 10 862 0 25 Dec 06
11 Chapter 11 770 0 24 Oct 07
12 12 644 0 02 Dec 07
13 13 1,292 0 04 Feb 08
14 14 827 0 16 Feb 08
Appx. Word Count 12,536 1  
 

 

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I Can Feel It!

Balrog - 14 Feb 07 - 10:19 PM

General Comment

I would like to comment on the use of going deaf would be hard a person such as an elf.  Even elves are not immune to things.  I also like the way you used the surroundings to help out the elf.  We would also do that in real life.  I worked with the blind and it is not easy.  Thanks again for a very interesting story about an elf going deaf.  I cried.

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Story Information

Author: SivanShemesh

Status: General

Completion: Work in Progress

Era: 3rd Age - Ring War

Genre: Action

Rating: General

Last Updated: 02/16/08

Original Post: 12/16/05

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Aragorn II
Boromir
Gimli
Legolas Greenleaf

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