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Inheriting the Earth
Gwynnyd - 04 Oct 06 - 6:36 AM
Dwim, that was great!
Dare I confess that it was not until the author's notes that I figured out who "Li" was? I kept trying to make him into someone, um, older... 
Gwynnyd
Inheriting the Earth
Dwimordene - 04 Oct 06 - 6:43 AM
not until the author's notes that I figured out who "Li" was? I kept trying to make him into someone, um, older...
And perhaps blonder? (Following movieverse.) ;-)
That's great, actually, I was struggling to inject *some* mystery into it, while not being totally, obviously coy about descriptions. So if Li's identity wasn't fully realized until the end, I'm quite happy.
Thanks for your comments,
Dwim
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