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“…You are still here.”

Centuries after his brothers' deaths, Maglor finds himself in their company once more. Blind and confused, he does not understand their visit. Response to the Show Me Fear! challenge.


Chapter List

Ch# Title Words Com. Updated
1 Blind 1,230 2 25 Jun 07
2 Author's Note 104 1 25 Jun 07
Appx. Word Count 1,334 3  



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Rhapsody - 01 Jul 07 - 3:51 PM

General Comment

This is just so hauntng and painful to see Maglor in such a state: going from near excitement of seeing his brothers again and yet being reminded once more how cruel his fate actually is. I think this especially came out with a great pacing and with a fine balance in showing the reader what Maglor can perceive. This is a great work!


Tyleet - 13 Feb 08 - 7:03 PM

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Oh. Oh, Maglor. Blind and unaware of his madness, because it doesn't ever occur to him that his brothers are dead, and therefore cannot be with him...his brothers that are trying to kill him. Except the Valar won't allow it...oh, that's terrible. And terribly well written. This one's going to stay with me!

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Story Information

Author: pitya

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - The Kings

Genre: Drama

Rating: General

Last Updated: 06/27/07

Original Post: 05/28/07

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