Gone Amiss

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The moments after Boromir's last smile, from Aragorn's point of view. A true drabble, 100 words as counted by MS Word. First Place, MEFA 2008



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Ch# Title Words Com. Updated
1 Gone Amiss 358 1 09 Apr 08
Appx. Word Count 358 1  



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Gone Amiss

Azalais - 08 Sep 08 - 3:09 AM

General Comment

So much emotion packed into so little space (that's the best thing about good drabbles!)  I love "The man born to be his Steward" - that's so sad, because it captures so many things about the complexities not only of the relationship that did exist between those two, but the relationship that could have evolved in a future now gone forever.

Aragorn's last line is perfect too - both the exclamation (perfect choice of wording) and that his thoughts fly to Denethor, *and* he wonders how on earth Thorongil is going to explain this one.

Bittersweet, and punchy both at once (and it's taken me more words to comment on it than it did you to write it!)

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Story Information

Author: Raksha

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - Ring War

Genre: Drama

Rating: General

Last Updated: 12/25/09

Original Post: 04/09/08

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