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Story Summary

It's a long ride back to Edoras.

 

 

Chapter List

Ch# Title Words Com. Updated
1 I. 2,698 0 05 Jul 11
2 II. 1,016 0 05 Jul 11
3 III. 2,286 0 05 Jul 11
4 IV. 2,185 0 05 Jul 11
5 V. 3,348 1 24 Aug 11
Appx. Word Count 11,533 1  
 

 

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Shandris - 06 Sep 11 - 12:36 PM

General Comment

The story reads very well as the characters are skilfully presented:  Faramir isn't an over-sensitive, hyper-romantic boy; Eowyn is hesitant but not hysterical. I disliked one thing:  Faramir's "eyes shining down on her like stars". Too much cuteness ;) Apart from that it's certainly a good story to read :)

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Certh - 02 Oct 11 - 5:03 AM

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Quite a beautiful story. The characterisations were very spot-on; the descriptions were beautiful, and the language was simply wonderful. I truly loved the dynamics of the relationship between Eowyn and Faramir, as well as her relationship with her brother; very smooth and true to the books. The interaction between them was very well-written, vivid and brimming with emotion.

All in all, a lovely story and a very engaging gap-filler.

Certh

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Ti'ana Luthien - 06 Oct 11 - 6:40 AM

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Oh, I loved this. Having just recently finished rereading the books again, I've been hungering for some good Eowyn/Faramir stories and this is truly beautiful. I love the way you portray the relationship between Eowyn and Eomer -- much the way I imagine it would have been in peace times -- and I feel you nailed the characters. It's a delicate story and a beautiful one, and the linguist in me is thrilled by your use of language. Thank you for sharing.

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Lakshmi - 17 Oct 11 - 2:32 AM

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I enjoyed this story immensely. The characters were subtle but well characterized, the narrative itself was intimate, deep, euphoric, without being heavy or overpowering. What a treat, this story. I wish I had read it sooner. 

& I loved your Eowyn, truly. 

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curiouswombat - 03 Mar 13 - 7:19 AM

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I thought I had commented on this when I first read it - but it seems not.  So this is just a note to say how well I think you have captured Éowyn at this point of her life and, too, how real the others appear even if they have only a line or two.


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Story Information

Author: Wheelrider

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - Post-Ring War

Genre: Romance

Rating: General

Last Updated: 08/25/11

Original Post: 07/05/11

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