Thunder Sings: 1. Thunder Sings

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1. Thunder Sings

You look at me, eyes wide with fear, and speak of reason
with faithless heart as black as night and poisoned breath.
You shroud your trembling voice in silk to hide your treason,
but all your pity tastes like blood and smells like death.

How dare you judge me in your false, deceitful voices
so full of lies they fill my mind with stale disgust?
How dare you judge my conscience and condemn my choices
when there is nothing in this world you dare to trust?

Yet memory still sings to me in muted thunder
of velvet solace in a sea of starless cold.
My eyes stare back at me and I, in silent wonder,
watch them reflect the dancing candles thousandfold.

So long as velvet lightning walks and thunder sings,
I’ll laugh defiance to your face and spite your kings.


Author's Note:

I won't explain the references in this poem because I believe a poem should speak for itself, but you won't understand this (and the third stanza in particular) unless you know what little Tolkien wrote about Queen Berúthiel and her cats... and a little about cats in general. ;)

This is my first try at writing a sonnet and I KNOW that sonnets are usually love poems... To me, this is a love poem of sorts.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Ellisande

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - The Kings

Genre: Poetry

Rating: General

Last Updated: 07/20/04

Original Post: 07/08/04

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