To Sing of Her: 1. To Sing of Her

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1. To Sing of Her

To Ondolinde - the Rock of the Music of Water, the Stone of Song, the Lily of the Plane, Gondolin of the last hope.


I want to sing of her

In empty twilit hours

When the wind runs whistling, laughing in the trees

And the sunset lights white walls

And songs and legends carried in the breeze

The light of eyes and suns, the might of hands and towers

The silence and the fire

And the final notes, and beauteous end to all

Remember when we sang the sunrise time?

Remember when we thought that beauty was eternal,

And fear was only something that the stories could have borne

The coming twilight and the cold

And rose and thorn

And long forgotten joy that will only live forever in sweet rhyme

And we sang of her in silver and in gold

And in jewels bright and pearls and sword and shield

In darkness and despair, in all the fiery and the fair

In tales forgotten, tales forsaken, tales untold

I want to sing of her and singing want to grieve

The fire and the dawn

And pale regret

And tell old, laughing fate that if I wished, I could forgive

Yet I can only wish I could forget

And I remember every sunrise, every dusk

White ashes and white dust, and singing tears

The weight of endless, lovely, fading years

I want to sing of her and seal the song in crystal and in pain

And memories of pride and fate, and hope, and all in vain

We found our own forever in creating, so we thought

In art, in love, in beauty, but were wrong

I want to sing of her and let forever rest in peace

In the crumbling ruins of my Stone of Song


Gondolin and her story were written - or translated, you may take your pick - by J.R.R Tolkien, to whom I am eternally grateful

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Joan Milligan

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 1st Age

Genre: Poetry

Rating: General

Last Updated: 09/15/02

Original Post: 09/14/02

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