Voices of Middle-Earth: 3. My Star

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3. My Star

My first-ever LotR poem, movie-based..... ~*~My Star~*~ My star hangs heavy and sometimes I feel that I cannot bear the colors of its light that fill every fibre of my being. So I give it to you and before my eyes I see the colors illumined as a crystal in the sun. I could never give them such radiance. Crimson for your valour in battle and quest emerald for the honour that keeps you young. blue for your selfless protection of others gold for the tenderness of your every touch. Purple for the royalty that rides in your veins white for the purity that curtains your heart. I watch, full hearted, from my cushioned pinnacle through my tears as these colors blend and dance mate and embrace until I can scarcely tell one from another forming shapes and shades too lovely for labeling. And I can scarcely tell, anymore, which is you and which is the Star. It does not pull you down as it pulled me; the weight of your being holds it steadfast. And I think what an overrated thing is Immortality after all..... and I descend from my pedestal to the highest peak I could ever attain standing my tallest when I lie by your side my Love.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Armariel

Status: General

Completion: Work in Progress

Era: Multi-Age

Genre: Poetry

Rating: General

Last Updated: 04/19/11

Original Post: 01/09/05

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