Last Night: 1. Last Night

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1. Last Night

This morning
I cannot focus on the words
of congratulations, nor the discussions
of weather and politics

I am remembering last night
your warm mouth
eager and welcoming
your willing body
opening to me
your flushed face
as you came undone
under my touch
your soft voice
crying out my name
over and over
as you clung to me

and I cannot meet the gaze
of your father the Prince
when he questions me
as to your duties in our kingdom
for fear that he will see in my eyes
that all I am thinking of
is tonight
and new ways
to make you
tremble beneath me

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: EdorasLass

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - Post-Ring War

Genre: Poetry

Rating: Adult

Last Updated: 03/20/05

Original Post: 03/20/05

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Last Night

Eilenach - 20 Mar 07 - 9:54 AM

Ch. 1: Last Night

Very evocative and romantic!

Last Night

EdorasLass - 18 May 07 - 8:01 PM

Ch. 1: Last Night


Thank you! This was one of my first attempts at anything romantical, so I'm glad to hear it worked.


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