Loving: 1. Loving

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1. Loving

“Evenstar” loving words whispered with hot breath
a trembling tongue exploring quivering lips,
teeth sink in hot, wet flesh

Fingers wander over expecting skin,
toes caress long legs
tongues meet
breast presses against breast

Sweet desire quickens the heartbeat
waves of heat raise through veins
arms embrace backs
and into the narrow, wet entrance
he pushes hot, throbbing flesh.

A Whimper, a thrust, a wince,
Calloused hands lift a soft pelvis
He retreats and thrusts in again
then halts

Groaning he whispers new words,
panting she answers
Fingers cling to fingers
as the relieving screams
echo in the summer night

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Vilwarin

Status: General

Completion: Ongoing Serial

Era: Multi-Age

Genre: General

Rating: Adult

Last Updated: 10/04/06

Original Post: 04/05/05

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RS - 14 Jul 06 - 10:12 AM

Ch. 1: Loving

Ummm.... Not only do I need a cold shower, I need a cigarette (and I don't smoke)!  VERY LOVELY!


zoesurfergirl - 14 Jul 06 - 1:19 PM

Ch. 1: Loving

That was a good way to descride it!

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