Of Denethor and Finduilas: 2. Betrothal

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2. Betrothal


Finduilas laughs as she frolics in the waves of the sea.

"Join me, love," she calls. "The water feels so lovely this morning!" She splashes water on the sand.

I look dubiously at the rippling surface. It has been years since I swam for pleasure alone.

She notes my hesitation. "If you don't come in," she says,"I shan't marry you in five months' time."

I shake my head at her. "You little minx."

Despite my reservations, I jump in the cool waters with a loud splash.

After all, she may just act on her threat.


"My heart shakes every time I look towards the east," I say. "How can I be a leader for the people of Gondor if I cannot withstand the Shadow?"

Denethor gently takes my hand. "Then my strength shall become your strength so that we can face the east as one.

I squeeze his hand and as we stand on the walls of Minas Tirith, we confront the Shadow.



He hands a blushing rose to her.

"A fair rose for a fairer lady," I hear him say.

Finduilas takes it, gracing him with a smile. I notice the lack of any real love in her eyes, though affection clearly shows as she looks upon him.

I know that she loves him not, though my son loves her with all that his heart possesses. True love cannot be forced from a body. It is a fickle creature, often gracing the oddest of pairs while cruelly ignoring those more deserving.

We can only hope that love will take hold and grow with time.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Loremaster of Anorien

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - The Stewards

Genre: Romance

Rating: General

Last Updated: 06/25/05

Original Post: 05/05/05

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