Glimmer in a Riddle: 1. Glimmer in a Riddle

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1. Glimmer in a Riddle

"A box without hinges, key, or lid,
Yet golden treasure inside is hid."

We knows it, we does.  The answer.  But we don't tells it to ourselves, precious.  We knows it, but we cannot say.  Why can we not say, precious?  Boxes it talks of, precious.  Boxes without lidses.  And golden treasure.  My precious is prettier, and no stinkin' boxes.  My pretty present.

Give us a chance; let it give us a chance, my precious-ss-ss.

We remembers.  We remembers Gammer.  Curse it, precious.  Curse it, we remembers.  What do we remember, precious?  Water, water washes my precious.  And birdses.  We haven't seen birdses in a long time.  So long, precious.  Gammer, birdses.  And birdses leave . . .

"Eggses!" he hissed.  "Eggses it is!"

AN:  The italics are straight from The Hobbit, Ballantine paperback p.83.

This is as close to a true drabble as I've ever gotten.  Anyone wanna comment?

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Mar'isu

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - The Stewards

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 02/19/06

Original Post: 02/19/06

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