Unwilling: 2. Notes

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This drabble was written in honor of the one hundredth anniversary of my father's birth. Over his lifetime, he saw his home evolve from the Valley of Heart's Delight, peopled by fruit growers, to Silicon Valley. The last commercial orchard in the city of my birth was cut down just a few years ago, and replaced by a shopping center named, ironically enough, "Cherry Orchard".

I thought an Avari might also be disoriented by the changes wrought during an unimaginably-long Elven lifetime:
Then befell the first sundering of the Elves. For the kindred of Ingwë, and the most part of the kindreds of Finwë and Elwë... were willing to depart and follow Oromë; and these were known ever after as the Eldar.... But many refused the summons, preferring the starlight and the wide spaces of Middle-earth to the rumour of the Trees; and these are the Avari, the Unwilling, and they were sundered in that time from the Eldar, and met never again until many ages were past.

The Silmarillion, Quenta Silmarillion, Ch 3, Of The Coming of the Elves and the Captivity of Melkor

Elsewhere in Middle-earth there was peace for many years; yet the lands were for the most part savage and desolate.... Many Elves dwelt there indeed, as they had dwelt through the countless years, wandering free in the wide lands far from the Sea; but they were Avari, to whom the deeds of Beleriand were but a rumour and Valinor only a distant name.

The Silmarillion, Of the Rings of Power and the Third Age

As ages passed the dominance of their fëar ever increased, 'consuming' their bodies.... The end of this process is their 'fading', as Men have called it....

Morgoth's Ring, HoME Vol 10, Part 3, Section 2, Laws and Customs Among the Eldar: Of Death and the Severance of fëa and Hröa
We know little of the language of the Avari; I chose to represent the two Elven proper names in this drabble in their Sindarin forms, rather than in Quenya.

Tauron means 'the Forester'; it is a Sindarin name for the Vala, Oromë the Hunter, who discovered the Elves at Cuiviénen and led many of them on the Great Journey to Aman. I thought that the Avari would prefer an epithet that recognized his connection to their beloved forests.

Ennor is Sindarin for 'Middle-earth'.

I deliberately selected yew as the species of the tree mentioned in the last lines of the drabble, for its unique mythological and practical attributes. It is considered sacred by the early peoples of the British Isles:
No tree is more associated with the history and legends of Great Britain than the Yew. Before Christianity was introduced it was a sacred tree favoured by the Druids, who built their temples near these trees — a custom followed by the early Christians. The association of the tree with places of worship still prevails.

"Yew." Botanical.com. 14 Jan 2008.
<Botanical.com www.botanical.com/botanical/mgmh/y/yew---08.html>.
In addition, individual specimens may be truly ancient:
[Evidence] based on growth rates and archaeological work of surrounding structures suggests the oldest trees (such as the Fortingall Yew in Perthshire, Scotland) are... likely to be in the range of 2,000 years [old]....

"European yew." Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia. 14 Jan 2008.
<Wikipedia.org en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taxus_baccata>.
Lastly, I associate Elves with archery, and yew is a wood favored for making strong bows. Tolkien mentions this association repeatedly:
[They] laid Beleg in a shallow grave, and placed beside him Belthronding his great bow, that was made of black yew-wood.

The Silmarillion, Quenta Silmarillion, Ch 21, Of Túrin Turambar

The Lord of the Eagles would not take them anywhere near where men lived. 'They would shoot at us with their great bows of yew,' he said, 'for they would think we were after their sheep. And at other times they would be right.'

The Hobbit, Ch 6, Out of the Frying-Pan into the Fire

Yew is the wood of choice for longbow making; the bows are constructed so that the heartwood of yew is on the inside of the bow while the sapwood is on the outside. This takes advantage of the natural properties of yew wood since the heartwood is able to withstand compression while the sapwood is elastic and allows the bow to stretch. Both tend to return to their original straightness when the arrow is released.

"European yew." Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia. 14 Jan 2008.
<Wikipedia.org en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taxus_baccata>.
In this drabble, I originally intended the yew to be simply an ancient tree surviving in the midst of a city, perhaps in a churchyard. However, in a comment, Marta thought it might, in fact, be an Ent. I very much like the idea and hereby adopt it. Thank you, Marta, for your astute suggestion!
'The trees and the Ents,' said Treebeard. 'I do not understand all that goes on myself, so I cannot explain it to you. Some of us are still true Ents, and lively enough in our fashion, but many are growing sleepy, going tree-ish, as you might say.'

The Two Towers, LoTR Book 3, Ch 4, Treebeard

'Some of my kin look just like trees now, and need something great to rouse them; and they speak only in whispers.'

The Two Towers, LoTR Book 3, Ch 4, Treebeard
I imagine that the Ent of this drabble resembles the Fortingall Yew (pictured here) in Perthshire, Scotland. Tanaqui observed that it looks like a mad old Ent; perhaps it is the kind that would tenderly shelter the fëa of a fading Avari in its arms while the hurrying Men go on with their neat, orderly, hasty lives, scrupulously avoiding its wild- and rather scary-looking corner of the churchyard:
It is believed to be the most ancient tree in the United Kingdom, and is probably even the oldest living thing in Europe.

"The Fortingall Yew". Heritage Trees of Scotland. (7 May 2008).
<Forestry Commission Scotland www.forestry.gov.uk/forestry/INFD-6UFC5F.>
When I stumbled across this enormously instructive essay, it became clear that I am not the first person who has imagined a yew as an ancient Ent:
The Yew is an incredibly atmospheric tree with a strong presence. This is especially noticeable when you enter a Yew grove or are in the presence of an old venerable 'Yew-being'. I'm convinced that the ability for active consciousness in trees and plants is hugely under-rated at present.

"Yew", by Anna Fraser. British Trees, native & introduced. (7 May 2008).
<The-tree.org.uk www.the-tree.org.uk/BritishTrees/yew.htm>.
For the Remembrances Challenge, January 2008.
Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards nominee, 2008.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Elena Tiriel

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: 4th Age

Genre: Drama

Rating: General

Last Updated: 01/15/08

Original Post: 01/14/08

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I am a new author who is serious about improving my writing. Your comments, both positive and negative, will be treasured, evaluated, and incorporated freely!

Thank you in advance for your time and effort.

My fiction includes:

Fell and Fair (for the Sons of Elrond at the Field of Celebrant and the Alternate Perspectives Challenges)

ET's Legolas Song Parodies (for the International Legolas Month Song Parody Palooza Challenge)

Famous First Lines (for the It Was a Dark and Stormy Night Challenge)

Holiday Carols, Middle Earth-style (for the Carols in Middle-earth Challenge)

and numerous drabbles, including: Alas, Poor Ufthak!

I also compiled many entries for the HASA Resource Library, including the following small sampling:

Interesting People to Meet & Greet:
Orophin & Rúmil, The Bardings, and The Beornings

Cool Places to See & Be Seen:
The Elf-path, The Forest Gate, The High Pass of Rivendell, The Old Forest Road, Undertowers, The Westmarch, and Libraries of the Shire

Wild Fauna to Look (Out) For:
Black Squirrels, Butterflies, Hunting Dogs, The Kine of Araw, Giant Bats, Giant Moths, and Giant Spiders

Toothsome Treats to Eat:
Honey-cakes of the Beornings

Magical Powers to Admire (from a safe distance):
The Unlight of Ungoliant

Great Literature to Read:
The Red Book, The Thain's Book - Annotated Copy of the Red Book, Findegil's Copy of the Thain's Book, The Akallabêth, Herblore of the Shire, Old Words and Names in the Shire, The Reckoning of Years, The Tale of Aragorn and Arwen, The Tale of Years, and Translations from the Elvish

Important Events to Remember:
The Invasion of Calenardhon by Balchoth and Orcs, and The Battle of Dale and Siege of Erebor

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