Losing Doriath: 2. Beleg

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2. Beleg

YOS 472

The King of the Sindar shook his head angrily.

"I forbid you to go.  You will not march with those betrayers of our kin."

Beleg looked at Elu, just stared into his eyes, his features growing colder than a starless midwinter night.

Elu, standing not three feet from the warrior, stared back, or rather down - being the tallest of the Children of Illuvatar had its advantages.  The King's wrath could be terrible, and it was most certainly gathering.  Great power shone from eyes of the one who had been chosen, who had seen the Trees.  A will mighty enough to cow any of his subjects ... or almost any.

"You forbid me?"  came the reply, finally.  "I think not."

"All those in Doriath, all, are subject to my command.  You will hear my words, Beleg!"  

"Once we were Quendi.  All of us.  Perhaps for most of us, that has changed," the Unbegotten replied, "but not for me.  Those in Doriath, you say, are yours to command.  That is true, and rightly so.  Outside of Doriath, however, we are free to do as we wish.  All are."  The last words were almost whispered.

Elu's eyes gleamed strongly enough to cast shadows on his recalcitrant Marchwarden's face.  "You will fight alongside those murderers, then?"

"Against the one who murdered Finwë your friend, the same one who murdered Alyri my wife, and countless other Quendi besides?  Yes, I surely will."

"Goodbye, my King.  If I return, I hope to find welcome here in these woods.  But if not, there are others who might make better use of my bow."

With that, Beleg Cuthalion turned on his heels and departed, destined for unnumbered tears.  

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

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Author: maeglin

Status: General

Completion: Work in Progress

Era: 1st Age

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 05/14/10

Original Post: 02/10/10

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