Gilraen's 2010 Birthday Stories: 1. Messenger's doubt - by Nath

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1. Messenger's doubt - by Nath

I raise my hand to draw my men's attention, yet before I give the order, I waver. I know this is the right decision. To go on would only lead us to founder among these fog-ridden rocks that bar our path, where every wave can bring unseen disaster. We should go back. We may reach the Havens – if my measure is not off – before the worst of winter's storms. Rest, heal our own hurts and Vingilotë's, try once more when the winds of the world are favourable again. Yet every time I return home, my resolve to attempt this again lessens.

It is only a moment of doubt, and even these men who know me well will not have seen it, will only think I pause to draw their attention fully.

"We go back," I say at last. We fail whether we continue on our path or turn back.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Gilraen

Status: General

Completion: Work in Progress

Era: Other

Genre: Other

Rating: General

Last Updated: 05/02/10

Original Post: 04/13/10

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2010 HASA Birthday Stories - 11 stories - Owner: 2010 HASA Birthday Cards
Story lists of the 2010 birthday present stories given to HASA members.
Included because: Gilraen's 2010 birthday drabbles.

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