You Can Never Go Back: 1. You Can Never Go Back

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1. You Can Never Go Back

I'm the only one looking back, of course.

Everyone else is bent over their oar, rowing for their lives, or desperately tieing things down against the rage of wind and ocean.


It's incredible.


From my vantage point in the crow's next, I see it all.

Like a giant's bath with the plug removed, the seas swirl in a deadly vortex, drowning the land of my birth eternally and irrevocably.

I know I should be looking ahead- looking to a new world- but I cannot tear my eyes away.

I was a minstrel in happier times- times long-dead even now, only days removed- and I tell no lie when I say that my songs charmed the hearts of all who heard them, but...


...but I shall never sing again as long as I live- who could sing of beauty and love and truth when they have seen as much death and horror and betrayal as we have, we lucky survivors of Illúvatar's wrath, we few, we unhappy few...

My kingdom is dead and drowned.

So are my songs.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Aruthir

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: 2nd Age - Rings

Genre: Other

Rating: General

Last Updated: 04/17/10

Original Post: 04/17/10

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You Can Never Go Back

Nath - 17 Apr 10 - 10:14 PM

Ch. 1: You Can Never Go Back

Ooh, nice! (in a somewhat morbid and unpleasant way... Wink )

You Can Never Go Back

Freyalyn - 29 Apr 10 - 2:17 AM

Ch. 1: You Can Never Go Back

Ooh, shiver.  I wouldn't have thought the crow's nest a safe place to be in these particular seas....

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