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Amid the Powers and Chances of the World

DrummerWench - 01 Jun 10 - 9:28 PM

Ch. 40: Of Folk of Men and Elven-Kin

The course of love is not running smooth; if it did, we'd have no story! Azalais, this is all so plausible, all the rumor & innuendo.  Also, I love the parallel conversations R. & L. are having, just beating around the bush and, uh, getting set up for misunderstanding?  I am continuing to enjoy this, even though we're out of imminent danger, all is still fraught.  Great job!

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Amid the Powers and Chances of the World

Azalais - 02 Jun 10 - 2:53 AM

Ch. 40: Of Folk of Men and Elven-Kin

The course of love is not running smooth;

Well, of course not, where would be the fun in that? You little devil!

just beating around the bush and, uh, getting set up for misunderstanding?

You might very well think that, I couldn't possibly comment...

I'm so glad it's all feeling plausible to you - and that you're enjoying it still! Thank you for the lovely feedback!

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