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Talk to Forodwaith

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DrummerWench - 27 Jan 07 - 12:41 PM

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Very nice, Forodwaith!  An interesting and slightly bittersweet take on Arwen's first days in Minas Tirith.  I liked your O.C., too--shy, but friendly to the noble madwoman.


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Elena Tiriel - 28 Jan 07 - 2:34 AM

General Comment

Ah, I lke this, Forodwaith! The noble Minas Tirith society indeed must have felt stifling to Arwen; I so empathize with her yearning to speak with someone without having to worry about stultifying Gondorian protocol.

And your OC, Helin, is a delight... reluctant to learn from peremptory healers, but becoming fascinated when she is simply speaking with someone who respects her, knows the herblore intimately, and loves to pass it along.

- Barbara

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Marta - 27 Jan 07 - 8:09 AM

Ch. 1: Greenery

Beautiful, Forodwaith. You captured Arwen here at a point where I think she would be experiencing growing pains for the first time in millennia, and I loved your OC too.

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