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Across Deeper Waters

druidwolf - 14 Sep 08 - 8:16 AM

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Lady E,    

No mere words belonging to Men can convey how much this story moved me.  Perhaps such language is best left to the depths of the heart.  Still, I must say this at least:  I found Across Deeper Waters to be truly inspired and imagined, skillfully realized, and beautifully conveyed.  Why there should be no other comments about it, I am at a loss to comprehend, but now you have mine. Thank you for a most vivid portrayal of a mother's love, memory and loss.

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Across Deeper Waters

Agape4Gondor - 14 Sep 08 - 10:51 AM

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I think the best thing about the front page is the comments section. I'm grateful that druidwolf commented upon this tale, else I would not have seen it.

Beautifully written, Lady E. I loved the repeating phrases. Made the whole much more powerful.

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