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Fallen

JunoMagic - 30 Apr 06 - 8:38 AM

Ch. 11: Remain and Defend

At the beginning the chapter feels almost too smooth for what has happened in the previous chapters.

However, as the chapter moves on, the tension increases with every little incident that makes the protagonist lose what composure she has left.

I have to admit that I liked the last paragraph best of the chapter. Very insightful both for how Minas Tirith can be perceived as a place, and how our perception of a place may change with what happens to us. 

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