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DKP - 18 Feb 12 - 11:41 AM

Ch. 1: Prologue: Sons and Daughters

In some ways, I almost miss the melancholy retrospective of your initial prologues, and yet this works very well to lead us into the story proper and the events that follow. And it gives us an important anchor for Narrator, a reference point of what she has lost before the battles and sieges even begin. I'm so glad to see this story continuing once more!

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