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Land of Light and Shadows
Radditz666 - 13 Aug 06 - 8:55 PM
Ch. 22: Ere the Bough Breaks
I was going to wait until the end of the story to write a comment but the urge is too strong : )
Everything Ive read is pure quality and Im enjoying it so much right now. I think your interpretations of Harad would make Tolkien himself smile for you have been so constistent in conveying your image of them from characterization to religion and everything else about them. I particularly like the subtleties in the words of the delegates from the various Harad tribes such as "I hope your wanderings find water" and many more. These further strengthen your image of Harad and give depth to it. As for the Destroyer, I think its innovative and fits well with the complexity of the Khurintu plan (what I have seen of it up to now anyway)
My ego forces me to say that I have had no need of your summaries or character lists that you have placed at the end of recent chapters because I am so engrossed in the story and have not missed the plot subtleties nor have I failed to appreciate them.
As a result of what Ive read so far, I will be adding you to my fav authours list and look forward to reading more of your work.
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