Comments for: Unmeant Bitterness
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Ch. 1: Unmeant Bitterness
Men shall murmur of injustice and favouritism.
IMO especially the use of the word 'favouritism' is too modern and too francophil. Tolkien always tried to avoid words of roman origin.
Maybe more like 'unjustness and undue goodwill' .
Otherwise I liked this story very much. I always like to learn more of Denethor's thoughts ;-)
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