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As the Tide by the Moon

JunoMagic - 30 Apr 06 - 3:50 AM

Ch. 20: The Women

Oh, what a great twist! I began suspecting as you elaborated on the mood swings and her fatigue.

What a perfect idea!

This is a really moving chapter and I admire how your develop your characters, dense and subtle. Really well done, this is a pleasure to read.

I'm trying very hard not to hope for a happy end.

One sentence was a bit strange, as if something's missing: "Of course she can speak of these things to no-one, which makes the pressure she is under than much greater."

Thank you for another great chapter!

Yours
Juno

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As the Tide by the Moon

EdorasLass - 30 Apr 06 - 11:12 AM

Ch. 20: The Women

Juno - Thanks!  I thought it would be too predictable a twist, then realized how I could use it in a different way!

And thank you for pointing out the typo. I have a bad habit of typing "than" for "that" and vice versa.

EL

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