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As the Tide by the Moon

JunoMagic - 30 Apr 06 - 3:58 AM

Ch. 21: The Advisor - VII

Once again I can only say how much I admire your skill in character development.

Your portrayal of Gríma is very realistic and convincing, how easily he discards Lathwyn  "Lathwyn has begun to bore Gríma" - perfect. So many other authors would have started making Gríma begin to suspect Lathwyn at this point, but I like your interpretation so much better. It is much more *real*. He's so self-centered and vain, he doesn't notice what's right in front of his eyes.

I am also enjoying how you set the enemies against each other: not only spying on Rohan, but spying on each other. Evil will often be its own undoing.

Another fascinating chapter.


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As the Tide by the Moon

EdorasLass - 30 Apr 06 - 11:14 AM

Ch. 21: The Advisor - VII

Juno- Thanks!

Yep, it is that Grima is self-center & vain, but it is also that he tends to think all servants - particularly female servants - aren't too bright, and couldn't possibly have the sense to fool him.

And IMO, of course there were spies everywhere! :)


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