HASA Stories

Comments for: Another Man's Cage

Talk to Dawn Felagund

If you are a HASA member, you must login to submit a comment.

We're sorry. Only HASA members may post comments. If you would like to speak with the author, please use the "Email Author" button in the Reader Toolbox. If you would like to join HASA, click here. Membership is free.



Another Man's Cage

IVIaedhros - 02 Nov 06 - 10:25 PM

Ch. 15: Chapter Fifteen--Tyelkormo

Heh...hehe...HAAHHAHAHAHAA *ow*

Go to Another Man's Cage

Another Man's Cage

oshun - 03 Nov 06 - 1:37 PM

Ch. 15: Chapter Fifteen--Tyelkormo

Another great chapter. I really sympathized with Maedhros having a nice voice but not singing much in light of his brother's gift--talk about a hard act to follow. Loved the duet though and the sly little nods to daddy's politics in it. The description of Feanor was hot--read that part a couple of times (OK, more than a couple). Continuing intriguing characterization and family dynamics.


Go to Another Man's Cage

Another Man's Cage

Rhapsody - 04 Nov 06 - 12:01 AM

Ch. 15: Chapter Fifteen--Tyelkormo

Dawn... this is simply beautiful. Celegorm who is trying to make sense of why Maedhros would want to court or marry and his own dreams on how he wished to grow up with his elder brothers - instead of them marrying - is deeply moving.

As I told you before, this chapter is perfectly written for a boy of his age: keeping track of details which only feels important to him, his observations of the maidens and oh! How I laughed when you wrote that Caranthir had a wee!elleth chasing after him. It makes me wonder what colour he sees this girl. This was another great chapter from your hands! Is it Friday already?



Go to Another Man's Cage

In Stories

Finding Story Comments

Only chapters with comments appear in the drop down list. "General Comments" are free floating and don't belong to a particular chapter.

To leave a comment for a chapter that doesn't appear in the drop-down list, go to that chapter and use the form on the page.

Donation Options

Keyword Search

Search story summaries and titles

Don't use commas. Separate words with spaces.