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Another Man's Cage
IVIaedhros - 08 Jun 07 - 2:04 PM
Ch. 46: Chapter Forty-Six--Macalaure
Heh, the forshadowing is so thick you could cut it with a knife, though you do it well enough that it doesn't intrude on the story. Ah, poor guy. The one who has the most lose is forced to suffer the longest from the Oath.
...inappropriate time to ask for a blessing indeed.
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Another Man's Cage
oshun - 09 Jun 07 - 11:39 AM
Ch. 46: Chapter Forty-Six--Macalaure
Love your Macalaurë and Vingarië and how you describe the cultural differences between the Noldor and the Telerin. In these recent three chapters Macalaurë is growing up rather quickly, but still remains Nelyo's adoring and adored little brother. You really get the large/close family details right in describing the brothers Fëanárion. (Trust me.; I know being one of seven myself.)
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