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Western Dawn

Alariel Silverstar - 18 Sep 06 - 7:53 PM

Ch. 1: Western Dawn

does that really have a point?

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Agape4Gondor - 18 Sep 06 - 8:47 PM

Ch. 1: Western Dawn

Oh! This took my breath away.

To be able to sit east of Minas Tirith and watch.

Oh! I still tingle at the thought of someday...

Exquisite detail. I was there with you. Thank you!!!!

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Allee - 18 Sep 06 - 9:11 PM

Ch. 1: Western Dawn

Fabulous! I so enjoyed this wonderfully introspective vignette. Definitely one that I'll reread over and over.

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Nieriel Raina - 03 Oct 06 - 7:09 PM

Ch. 1: Western Dawn

I love everything that you write and this was no exception. Beautifully descriptive, I could see it all in my mind's eye! You make me FEEL Legolas' feelings and I LOVE that! Hats off to you! You remain my inspiration and favorite author!

NiRi

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Iel_o_Thorongil - 03 Oct 06 - 9:46 PM

Ch. 1: Western Dawn

I'm sitting here quite awed. This is completely who Legolas is--down to every last detail. The whispering of thanks, the reminder of light, the simile of his land remaining dark....it's beautifully crafted. And it portrays a character that is truly strong. Psychologically, it works--something I find lacking from many fanfics. Wonderfully done!

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