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Bridges of Stone

JunoMagic - 02 Jan 06 - 3:16 AM

Ch. 1: Bridges of Stone

I love the way you turn misconceptions into surprise and joy in this story. The personalities of Gimli and Legolas really ring true in this story.

And I'd like to express a heartfelt "Oh, yes, please!" about the last line.

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Bridges of Stone

docmon - 04 Jan 06 - 7:08 PM

Ch. 1: Bridges of Stone

Thank you, JunoMagic! I'm glad the characters rang true for you.

And I second that 'yes, please!'

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Bridges of Stone

Nieriel Raina - 08 Oct 06 - 4:36 PM

Ch. 1: Bridges of Stone

Wow...all I can say is now I see why you are Thundera's beta. Incredible story! How have I never read your stuff before? *bangs head on desk* Well....only one thing to do...stay up all night reading of course!

I really enjoyed this rendering of Legolas seeing Aglarond for the 1st time. I LOVE how you got into Gimli's head and how he sees Legolas. You portray their friendship well...even Gimli's doubt about it at first. Brilliant writing! I look forward to reading more!

NiRi

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docmon - 08 Oct 06 - 7:59 PM

Ch. 1: Bridges of Stone

Thank you, Nieriel! What wonderful compliments. I'm glad you enjoyed this portrayal of their friendship. It is a scene I always wanted to see, and so I wrote one myself!

I don't have too many stories out there as of yet, but I'm working on it!

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