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All in a Day's Work

DKP - 20 May 07 - 11:52 PM

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What an incredible drabble series! You captured each segment so fully. The different scenes are crystal clear in my mind, and all flow together very well into a cohesive and entertaining whole.

I love your quick characterizations: complete for what the drabbles need, with many of them drawn in just a few words. Your "piratey Imrahil" was particularly wonderful - just perfectly as I'd imagine him.

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All in a Day's Work

Elena Tiriel - 05 Feb 10 - 8:56 PM

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Ah, what a great drabble series, Gwynnyd! Each drabble is a self-contained gem, with gorgeous details in a few deft words, perfectly suited to the PoV of the character.

And together, they are strung together into a satisfying story line -- and the whole is far greater than the sum of its parts.

Beautifully done!

- Barbara

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