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The Princess and the Horse Lord

Gandalfs apprentice - 02 Feb 06 - 8:30 AM

Ch. 1: The Houses of Healing

Hi, oshun: A promising beginning. Are you planning to have Lothiriel and Eowyn meet while they await the news from the Black Gate?

Gandalfs apprentice 

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oshun - 02 Feb 06 - 9:38 AM

Ch. 1: The Houses of Healing

It is intended to be short but I will have time to write about Eowyn and Faramir before the Armies of the West return to Minas Tirith. I intend to use the cultural differences/expectations between the South of Gondor and Rohan to delay a bit the discovery by Eomer and Lothíriel of who the other one is, e.g., she doesn't see a King as being so familiar with his men and so unpretentious. I think Eowyn may figure out who the mystery man is before Lothíriel and Faramir do--I am still chewing on that idea.

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Ti'ana Luthien - 16 Feb 06 - 11:52 AM

Ch. 1: The Houses of Healing

This a different portrayal of Lothiriel from the way I'm used to seeing her - and I like it very much! Your writing is beautiful and I genuinely feel the connection between Eomer and Lothiriel - and I like how neither knows who the other is. You characters truly come alive.

Bottom line: A *very* interesting beginning. You have hooked me!

 Cheers,

Ti :) 

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