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The Princess and the Horse Lord

Bardess - 02 May 07 - 4:19 AM

Ch. 26: To Dream or To Portend

I do like your characterizations of famous Elves.  They are frequently written as quite noble and remote. Your Galadriel is a frank, outspoken middle aged woman perfectly suited to speak her mind and to mentor a younger woman with frank and pithy insights.  Her side of the Feanor and the hair story is hilarious.  Erestor and Glorfindel are much more endearing for being made to bicker like the guys in The Odd Couple.

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oshun - 02 May 07 - 9:02 AM

Ch. 26: To Dream or To Portend

Thanks, Bardess! Glad to see that you are still reading. And so happy you liked the set up of the new (old elven) characters. I will need Glorfindel and Erestor again in future plot developments and Galadriel a bit too. That was a somewhat unruly chapter, but I am moving forward for the moment. Someday...I will go back and straighten it out a bit. At the risk of showing how greedy and ungrateful I am: what did you think of Chapter 27?

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Bardess - 04 May 07 - 2:46 PM

Ch. 26: To Dream or To Portend

I will read it ASAP.  Life is coming at me pretty fast these days, and I like to take the time to read and reread thoughtfully before offering an opinion.

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oshun - 04 May 07 - 3:14 PM

Ch. 26: To Dream or To Portend

Oh, Bardess! In no way did I mean to push--it's the thoughtfulness of your comments that I love. Working on finishing up next chapter right now.

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Crowdaughter - 07 Oct 07 - 3:41 AM

Ch. 26: To Dream or To Portend

'Annoying brat. She teases the twins non-stop. If I were one of them, I would want to pull her hair out too.'"

"That sounds like me and my brothers. I was smaller, a girl, and aggravating, but they were always scolded for hurting me," Lothíriel said giggling.

"You take Fëanor's side in this ancient dispute then?" Galadriel asked with threatening growl in her elegant voice.

"Not if you can tell me, my Lady, that you were a sweet, placid child."

ROTFLMAO I love this whole exchange, and the idea that ancient Galadriel and young Lothiriel discuss... er... elven *curves*. Laugh out loud

Lovely chapter! I am going to finecomb-read the whole story now, I think...

Consider me well and truly hooked. Smile

Aislynn

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