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The Heart of a Knight

TariElfLady - 03 Feb 06 - 12:12 PM

Ch. 1: The King's Judgement

This is very good indeed.  I hope there will be more chapters.

Tari

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oshun - 10 Feb 06 - 5:09 PM

Ch. 1: The King's Judgement

Very well-written and interesting gap-filler. Evokes a particular time and place well, post-war Minas Tirith.

Oshun

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Agape4Gondor - 02 May 06 - 6:52 PM

Ch. 1: The King's Judgement

My goodness - this is really excellent - you squeeze so very much into such a short piece.  I was delighted to meet so many of the 'common' soldiers of Gondor. 

Very nice indeed.  I'm bookmarking it and waiting for the next chapter.

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Larner - 19 Sep 08 - 12:46 AM

Ch. 1: The King's Judgement

I've also loved looking at this situation, although I've looked at it from Frodo's POV and that of observers in the gallery, and not followed Beregond as you've done here.

Love the dynamics between Beregond, Bergil, and Ivorlas, and the byplay as he finds himself needing to deal with his wound and get some of that healing sleep folks keep talking about.

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