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In The Pits Of Utumno

laureleaf - 09 Jul 06 - 8:09 PM

Ch. 1: In The Pits Of Utumno

This made me laugh just as hard as when I first read it on SOA!  Hmmm, How do you think Elrond would react to being called Melkor?

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In The Pits Of Utumno

Sirielle - 30 Aug 06 - 4:56 PM

Ch. 1: In The Pits Of Utumno

You cheated me ;) It sounded a bit childish from the start, the elf knew too much and his way in was too easy, etc. Too naive... But appearance of the voice sounding like the thunder of doom rescued all. And the Melkor. What a choice ;) Amusing ending :)

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