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Last Light

Jael - 17 Sep 06 - 10:05 AM

Ch. 1: Last Light

their tiny limbs would wipe the water from their tops

Beautiful!  Such a tree-ish observaton.  The painting you chose fits perfectly with the story, and the tie-in with the crebain who spied upon the Fellowship is wonderful.

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IgnobleBard - 17 Sep 06 - 7:24 PM

Ch. 1: Last Light

Jael,

Thanks for commenting on my story. It's my first try at a challenge on the site and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Crowdaughter - 16 Feb 07 - 12:38 PM

Ch. 1: Last Light

Beautiful story from a very unique perspective, masterfully executed. Love the observations, all so very fitting to the POV, and the lyrical images you give here. And the image is perfectly fitting, too!

Great story! Thank you for writing!

Aislynn 

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IgnobleBard - 16 Feb 07 - 9:31 PM

Ch. 1: Last Light

Aislynn,

Your comments are so sweet they make me blush. Thanks so much for your kind words about the writing. I did this story for the art challenge here on HASA and I'm very glad you enjoyed it. 

Mike

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