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Yours to command
Shasta - 06 May 07 - 1:11 PM
Oh, no! Another cliffhanger. On one hand, I feel the urge to shake Eomer for instantly betraying his unease; on the other hand, it would be so unlike him to pretend to go along with everything and hide his initial reaction.
Good character development with your OC, by the way - I find him convincingly creepy.
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Yours to command
Lialathuveril - 07 May 07 - 11:29 AM
Hello Shasta,
I know, another cliffie. At the moment no matter where I finish a chapter, I somehow always end up with one of them!
I agree Éomer is not the type to hide his feelings, even if in this case it would have been better for him. Still, this means more fun for us. And I'm pleased to hear you find Muzgâsh nicely creepy.
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia
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