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O, Cruel Fate

erunyauve - 19 Apr 07 - 11:29 AM

Ch. 10: Intimations of Flammability

>>He leant forward, peering into the pool. The Children dreamed of cows? Burning cows?

But I'm sure they're aesthetically-pleasing burning cows.

>>It was Neldor, holding a flaming brand.

I can't think of anyone less fit to be playing with fire.  Ellie, look out for your eyebrows!

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oshun - 19 Apr 07 - 2:46 PM

Ch. 10: Intimations of Flammability

I agree--the title rocks! I have commented extensively on this in another venue, but you actually slipped a few things in since I last read it. I missed Neldor's latest case notes--chilling as usual. You are adding to the list of things I will never be able to write about seriously again. (Note to self: stay away from Balrogs.) I have a huge crush on Gil-Galad now also--he was cool before, but yours is to die for.

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Greywing - 22 Apr 07 - 1:44 PM

Ch. 10: Intimations of Flammability

Erunyauve:

But I'm sure they're aesthetically-pleasing burning cows.

I am certain too. Aesthetically pleasing to the point of inaccuracy.

I can't think of anyone less fit to be playing with fire.  Ellie, look out for your eyebrows!

I agree. And it's not going to be just fire, too. Will Elrond stop him in time? Wink Thanks for commenting!

Oshun:

You are adding to the list of things I will never be able to write about seriously again. (Note to self: stay away from Balrogs.)

Oops.

I have a huge crush on Gil-Galad now also--he was cool before, but yours is to die for.

That is praise indeed! Handsome, kingly, efficient, and fond of small dogs-- what's there not to like? Thank you :)

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