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Fruition

DKP - 18 May 07 - 9:16 PM

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I am almost too stunned by your Imrahil (Gah! What did you DO to my favorite guy??) to leave a coherent review, but this is a very, very well-written AU. You have managed to turn my usual reactions to the characters completely topsy-turvey: utter pity for poor Denethor, and a snarling GRRR for Finduilas and Imrahil - and that last one is particularly an accomplishment! The ending brings up all sorts of thoughts about what Gondor will now look like when the King returns...

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Balrog - 19 Mar 07 - 6:33 PM

Ch. 1: Fruition

I like this very much. It gives the readers a sense of what could have happened if the Dol Amroth people were given the right to become heirs to the throne.

Only thing is that Thorngil got away.

Balrog

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EdorasLass - 19 Mar 07 - 9:12 PM

Ch. 1: Fruition

Balrog -

I'm a real sucker for AUs, and I do seem to write not particularly nice ones. I just think it's fun, to turn things upside down from what we're used to seeing.

Thanks so much!

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Kateydidnt - 08 Apr 07 - 8:24 PM

Ch. 1: Fruition

I would love to see a continuation of this, years later in which the "King" of Gondor finds out that Thorongil was no minor mercenary. . . I just want to see them get their comuppance.

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