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The Old Ways

oshun - 08 Feb 07 - 10:18 AM

Ch. 4: The Malachite Leaf, and Other Subtleties

This story works on so many levels. It's funny, sad, wicked, and moving. I love Elrond's voice. I had read bits and pieces of it in the past, but just read everything here altogether. It is definitely greater than the sum of its parts. I knew you could really write, and this story reinforces that fact for me. Love the reflection here of the entire complicated history you have created for Glorfindel, Fingon, et al. throughout this story arc. (Sorry, excuse the gushing and clichés--I do have good taste in writing though!)

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The Old Ways

IVIaedhros - 13 Feb 07 - 10:12 PM

Ch. 4: The Malachite Leaf, and Other Subtleties

Interesting possibilities for an AU...I normally steer clear of anything slash, but you've done a good job devising this situation.   I'll try and give a more in-depth critique later.

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