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A New Day

Kestrel - 07 Oct 07 - 3:01 PM

Ch. 5: The Games They Played

This story overall gives good insight to the Noldor, in Aman and in Middle Earth.  The Silm is my favorite Tolkien story, and you have done a very good job showing how complicated the Noldor and their lives were.  Snce I know how it ends, this is bittersweet to me, but you do a wonderful job showing this extended family.

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A New Day

oshun - 07 Oct 07 - 6:21 PM

Ch. 5: The Games They Played

Thanks again for further reviews on this novella, Kestral. I am hoping to add a new chapter really soon. You say, "This story overall gives good insight to the Noldor, in Aman and in Middle Earth." Thanks so much--I've tried to do that (from my minority position of shameless admirer of the Noldor and their incomparable contribution to the survival of the Eldar in Middle-earth beyond the first few years of the First Age!). 

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