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Remedial Smithery

erunyauve - 29 Mar 07 - 11:41 AM

Ch. 1: Learning

>>His hammer hit the middle of the sword, and it was suddenly almost straight.  He looked up at Aulë in wonder.  "But... how is that even possible?!"

>>"Vala," was all that Aulë said.

Lovely blend of humour with touching moments.  I rather suspected Legolas' reason, but it's still moving when it comes, and genuine.  Aule is wonderfully idiosyncratic, just as one would expect (or not expect) from a demi-god.

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Remedial Smithery

ziggy - 26 Jun 10 - 5:50 AM

Ch. 1: Learning

I have read this several times before and each time I laugh at the idea of Aulë forgetting his hair is on fire! There is too, that immense sense of loss that Legolas is trying to fill, and that makes my heart squeeze a bit too. There is this wonderful disrespect in your writing that is so cheekily irreverent but at the same time, poignant and beautiful.

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