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Lost Out Of Time II : The Coming Together

Virtuelle - 03 Sep 07 - 9:50 AM

Ch. 20: Conversations

Gilnaur,

This story has me willing Eli to meet her dad.... if I could jump in the story and help her I would.  It's a wonderful feeling  to read something that keeps me so intrested.   I check every day to see if you have added another chapter.  I so want Eli to meet her dad and be accepted into the family, but I also know you like to weave a good plot.  Keep up the excellent work.

Waiting for your next post. Virtuelle

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Gilnaur - 07 May 08 - 10:20 AM

Ch. 20: Conversations

Thanks Virtuelle,

You are right, I do like to weave a good tale and I like to write with as much descriptive detail as possible. The worlds I set my stories in are pretty clear in my mind and I like to share them with my readers so they can visualize them as well.

Sorry about the delay in acknowledging your comment. I have discovered there is no way in doing so with a personal thankyou! 

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ecan48 - 02 May 08 - 1:40 PM

Ch. 33: Where Is The Future Leading?

Ihave been following this story for sometime I find it delightful. hope to read more some

ecan48

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Virtuelle - 06 May 08 - 11:16 AM

Ch. 33: Where Is The Future Leading?

Gilnar, nice to see you continuing with this story,  I find it very enchanting and well developed. I have been following it since last year.  Thank you for such descriptive writing, it lets you feel like your right there. Looking forward to the next chapters.   

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Gilnaur - 07 May 08 - 10:01 AM

Ch. 33: Where Is The Future Leading?

Thanks Ecan2

I am glad you like the story. It is developing into one of my personal favorites although right now RL is putting something of a crimp in my writing time.

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Gilnaur - 07 May 08 - 10:05 AM

Ch. 33: Where Is The Future Leading?

Virtuelle, Glad you felt the desire to continue with your reading of the story. I appreciate it when folks take the time to leave comments. I try to answer them all usually with a private thankyou, but never could figure out how to do that here.

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Virtuelle - 03 Oct 09 - 11:16 PM

Ch. 45: The Field Of Honor, Or Justice Comes To Those Who Wait

Thank goodness she caught that yrch blood!

Thanks for continuing with this story, I check back into HASA every few weeks to see if you have added a chapter.  

Turin and Eli were wonderful in your previous chapter.  So glad they got to pledge their love before the duel.  Keep up your fantastic story Gilnaur.  

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ecan48 - 23 Nov 09 - 12:48 PM

Ch. 45: The Field Of Honor, Or Justice Comes To Those Who Wait

Im looking forward to seeing more of this sequel. it really good!!

Ecan

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