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Lost Out Of Time II : The Coming Together

Virtuelle - 03 Sep 07 - 9:50 AM

Ch. 20: Conversations

Gilnaur,

This story has me willing Eli to meet her dad.... if I could jump in the story and help her I would.  It's a wonderful feeling  to read something that keeps me so intrested.   I check every day to see if you have added another chapter.  I so want Eli to meet her dad and be accepted into the family, but I also know you like to weave a good plot.  Keep up the excellent work.

Waiting for your next post. Virtuelle

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Lost Out Of Time II : The Coming Together

Gilnaur - 07 May 08 - 10:20 AM

Ch. 20: Conversations

Thanks Virtuelle,

You are right, I do like to weave a good tale and I like to write with as much descriptive detail as possible. The worlds I set my stories in are pretty clear in my mind and I like to share them with my readers so they can visualize them as well.

Sorry about the delay in acknowledging your comment. I have discovered there is no way in doing so with a personal thankyou! 

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